رواية غرامة عشق

Introduction to the novel
Your love is like a dream, olive forest, your love is meant to do my best to strive for it, and like an addiction I submit under its will, my longing is like miles, and my torment is tons, and here I am wallowing between fines here and there, the fine of your love!

Important alert: This novel was written in 2017, i.e. at the beginning of my path, and I know very well that it contains many errors due to my lack of experience and my weakness at the beginning. Criticize you and choose the method of criticism that suits you?
Thank you.